So Fallen is still not live, which is making me very sad indeed. From your posts on Facebook, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say it's making you guys sad, too.
To keep you going, I've decided to give you the prologue of Fallen. Hopefully that will tide you over until Zeth and Sloane show up....
Castle
Security offices
Jimmy
Renford
Five forty-seven a.m. Five forty-fucking-seven a.m. I hate clocking in for the early
shift. I’ve been doing nights for the last three months though, and I think
they decided it was time I put in the hard yards. That’s fair enough, I
suppose. However, working with Myers is something else entirely. The man has no
sense of personal hygiene, and also has no idea when to shut the fuck up. I’ve
only been rostered with him three or four times since starting work here. Since
then I’ve heard from the other guys that to land a shift with Myers is a
punishment of some sort. I’m here on time; I’m never late. I do the job well,
so I have no idea what ball I’ve dropped to deserve this shit. It ain’t gonna
fly, though. Today is gonna be all-out hell.
The bank of screens in front of the desk where Myers and
I are stationed are already filled with images of people, awake and going about
their early morning routines. It’s never seemed right to me—that the world
never seems to stop moving. That there are people always awake, no matter what
time of day or night, for us to witness on the screens of these monitors. We
are Big Brother, overseeing the mundane rituals and the sometimes highly
illicit activities of Seattle’s residents. We see everything, and I mean everything. It even creeps me out sometimes, and I work here.
“So I told her, ‘bitch, if you really want to get on
with my sister, you can’t be talking to me like that in front of her. I’m her
baby brother, you know? She’s always going to stick up for—’ Hey! Hey, Renford,
check that out. The feed's gone live for the new gas station account. Did you
notice that? I can’t believe they want us to watch over eighteen new places.”
Myers nudges me a little too hard with his elbow, and the takeaway coffee cup I’ve
been stirring sugar into rocks dangerously, nearly spilling the hot black
liquid all over my crotch.
“Careful, asshole! You nearly burned my dick off.”
Myers just laughs his annoying donkey bray of a laugh,
completely unfazed by the clear dislike in my voice. I’m not even pretending to
hide it. Not that Myers seems to care. “Whatever, man. Hey, and check that
out.” He stabs a finger at the bottom right-hand screen, the one right in front
of me, gesturing to the vehicle that’s just rolled onto a gas station
forecourt. I know the gas station; it’s the one out by the airport. I’ve used
it enough times before to recognize the layout and the busy street out of the
building’s window, as the camera’s view rotates from the outside to an internal
shot.
Myers is still staring in awe at the car that’s just
pulled up to the pumps. It’s an Aston Martin one-77; the kind of supercar little
boys dream about owning one day, while they’re playing with the Matchbox
version. This monster of a car is being well cared for. The bright sheen to the
hood speaks of a wax polish that must have been done very recently. Even I have
to agree that it’s a beautiful machine.
“I’ve thought about test driving one of those things,”
Myers says, stuffing a piece of buttered toast into his mouth. “You know, you
can go down to the dealership and pretend you’re interested in buying one. Wear
something nice, make them think that you have some money or something. I figure
that’s the only way I’m gonna find myself behind the steering wheel of a car
like that,” Myer says, brushing crumbs from the outside of his mouth. “You
never know, though. I might win the lottery one of these days.” Myers continues
to ramble on about playing the odds in some sort of betting ring he is involved
in, offering me a buy-in if I’m interested, but I’m not listening. I’m looking
at the man who’s just climbed out of the backseat of the car. I know the man,
although a lot of people wouldn’t. He’s an A-list celebrity. The kind of
celebrity that only people in certain circles would be acquainted with. He’s
mentioned on the news sometimes, but not in the entertainment section; they
report about him in the section that covers the unsolved murders and brutal
beatings that sometimes take place within the darker corners of this city. They
never say his name, although I am well aware of it: Charlie Holsan.
Charlie Holsan has just gotten out of that ridiculously
expensive car and is now walking into the gas station. A tall, unfamiliar-looking
man gets out of the driver’s seat and follows Charlie inside. I don’t know the
driver, but I know Charlie quite well; he’s been my brother’s employer for the
past eight years. Eight years of Sammy never answering his phone, and never
showing up to family events. Eight years of me bailing Sammy out of jail when
his boss has been too busy to send someone himself. Eight years of my brother
becoming more and more corrupt, as this English prick sinks his claws just a
little bit fucking deeper.
I hate the man.
Charlie and his driver don’t get gas; they both enter
the building, dressed in their ridiculously expensive suits, their Italian
leather shoes shining under the bright glare of the gas stations strip lights.
They start perusing the shelves, looking for…looking for I don’t know what. We’ve
been trained to spot people like this—people who look like they’re killing time.
It generally means that they’re about to hold up the place, but somehow I think
armed robbery is a little below Charlie’s pay grade. If he were short on cash,
which I don’t think he is, then he has a whole crew of mindless goons who can
perform such menial tasks for him.
“Lucky bastard,” Myers says, shoving more of his
breakfast into his mouth. “What do you think? Personal banker? Lawyer? He looks
like a fucking lawyer. Gotta have some serious money to afford an Aston.”
If Myers were one of the other guys, someone I actually
like hanging out with, I might break my silence and tell him what this man does
for a living. As it stands, I simply reach forward and hit the lockout button
that prevents the screen in front of me from scrolling through to another
camera somewhere else in the city. Charlie and his hired help continue to pace
around the store, picking up random items from the shelves and talking to one
another. Charlie selects an item from the shelf and says something to his
henchman, laughing. He tosses the packaged item to the other man, who opens it
and starts to eat the contents inside. Over Charlie’s shoulder, the door opens
and a young woman walks in, talking on her cell phone. She doesn’t look up. She
doesn’t notice Charlie and the other guy stop laughing and look at her. She has
a big bag strapped over her shoulder; it looks unwieldy and awkward to carry.
She walks to the checkout and sets it down at her feet, laughing at something
that the person on the other end of the phone is saying to her.
I have a bad feeling about this. I don’t know what it
is, but something…something just isn’t right. The men aren’t buying anything,
and they seem far too focused on this young woman to be merely showing a
passing interest. I think about reaching for the radio and getting the boys
onto this, but what would I say? I can’t explain how I know Charlie, how I know
that this middle-aged guy who looks like your average businessman is actually a
crime kingpin, wanted for countless murders and crimes of drug trafficking. If
I did, then that would definitely be getting Sammy into trouble. The punk
deserves it for sure, but my mom sure as hell doesn’t.
The girl’s paid for something over the counter, and
Charlie and his friend have stopped their horseplay and have queued up behind
her. The driver moves to one side, while Charlie bends down and collects up the
girl’s bag for her, holding it out to her as she turns around. It’s a kind
thing to do, and the girl grins at him as she accepts the bag.
“Whoa! Hang on a second,” Myers says. He leans across
me, his eyebrows bunching together. “What the hell is that guy doing?”
I’ve been too busy watching Charlie as he tricks this
girl into believing he is a gentleman to notice the other guy; he is standing
really close behind her, and it looks like he’s holding something up to the
back of her neck. Something sharp; something silver; something glinting in a
fuzzy patch of white through the CCTV camera’s low-res feed. Adrenalin slams
through my body. “Holy shit! He’s going to rob her or something. He’s actually
going to do it.”
Before I react, the siren on the wall behind me begins
to wail, loud and piercing; the cashier, standing on the other side of the Plexiglas
right in front of the three people in the gas station, has a closer view of
what is going on there, and he obviously thinks this girl is in danger, too. He’s
hit the alarm. “Fuck. Do it. Call the emergency response unit.”
Myers might be an asshole, but he reacts quickly. He’s on
the line, giving the cops the details of the robbery in progress and then he’s
dispatching the security unit employed by Castle. I’m having trouble peeling my
eyes from the screen. The driver and Charlie have both stepped away from the
woman, and whatever it was the driver was holding up to the woman’s neck has
now been secreted away again; the cashier has come around the front of the
booth—moron! They’re told never to do that—and is trying to force Charlie and
the other man out of the gas station.
Charlie’s driver pulls a gun. Things have descended into
the realm of ‘fucked’ very quickly, but as soon as that gun comes out, I know
it’s game over. I can see it all happening—the cashier trying to be a big guy,
rushing the other two men, the gun going off, the cashier falling to the
ground…
But the gun never goes off, and it’s not the cashier who
falls to the ground. It’s the woman. The cashier turns, and his complete horror
is perfectly visible even through the crappy camera footage. Charlie says
something, and then the driver is pushing past the cashier, snatching something
up off the counter. He stoops, pushes the girl over, and lifts her shirt up,
baring her stomach.
“Oh fuck. He’s not—he’s not gonna—” Myers says. I know
what he’s thinking. He’s thinking the driver is going to sexually assault her
on top of whatever he’s already done, but he doesn’t. He bends over her body,
blocking whatever he’s up to. His shoulder shifts up and down for a moment and
then he pulls the girl’s shirt back down to cover her belly. He throws
something down on top of her where she lies—something long, and thin, and
black—laughing. Now that he’s no longer obstructing the camera’s view of her,
it’s plain to see there’s something wrong with the girl. There is something seriously wrong with her. She struggles
back up onto her hands and knees on the floor, and it looks like she’s retching,
her body jerking violently. The cashier rushes to the girl’s side, placing an
unsure hand on her back, his mouth moving as he speaks frantically to her.
Charlie and the driver casually stroll out of the gas station...and the woman on her knees begins to vomit blood.